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Stealing Home; by Grayson
Topic Started: May 26 2011, 08:28 AM (728 Views)
abbey
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Sorry Guys,

Passwords were changed before I remembered this section, but here is the feedback.

-abbey

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10/5/10

From: Tojoyama


Wow, that Liz can fly!
Nice action, but great dialogue. You're really Joss Whedon ain'tcha?

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10/8/10

From GrimJack

Absolutely loved it!

Flawless integration of dialogue and action, with the final 'knock-knock' ending picture-perfect.

Couldn't have been better.
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