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Processing; By Mag
Topic Started: May 26 2011, 08:51 AM (8,304 Views)
Devilman
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1/21/09 ? (date actually says 5/26/60! Weird)

Mag,

I hope you don't keep the group waiting on more chapters of this story. It really fleshes out Mag's persona very well.
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Mag
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1/21/09

No, I was just putting it up in bite sized morsels. I'll be editing it as I go, there were things I had missed when I first wrote it, so I'll be correcting those things here.
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Alright, that one's up. I may try and pick up the Boley piece, but it will probably end up in my profile instead of the prologue section. I don't think Boley will make another appearance in the 'Verse. The card game and harassing Helena was his final wave and he's gone off to that Firefly in the sky...
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abbey
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Sorry Guys,

Passwords were changed before I remembered this section, but here is the feedback.

-abbey

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1/25/09

From: Ariel

Awww, poor Boley. He was fun.
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Mag
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1/25/09

He is fun, but not a practical person for this sort of thing. Plus, he's tied to FS, and with the exception of Mag I think I'll use all new folks.
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Sorry Guys,

Passwords were changed before I remembered this section, but here is the feedback.

-abbey

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2/5/09

From: Tojoyama

being selfishly focused on my PC, I can't help but wonder what Rikka would think of them if she knew just what they are capable of, and what they'd done in the past. She doesn't realize...

or should I say when she realizes...
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